Distillation: AP English Literature and Composition Free-Response Question

        To deliver the narrator’s intended criticism of brainy people, the narrator of the excerpt utilizes imagery, point of view, and direct characterization. Through the use of various alienating phrases such as “blindfold into some nasty pursuit” or “intellectual sort”, utilizing disturbing pictures of strange people poking and stabbing spiders and frogs, and also speaking directly to the audience is all done in order to further antagonize the subject, which are intellectuals. The narrator himself is in fact blind and is ignoring the benefits of what the intellectual has accomplished for society, in order to further promote his own senseless brand of thinking, which is that one is fortunate to have to do hard manual labor in order to survive, rather than ponder because one is well off enough to. In the passage, the narrator displays the attitude of being both ignorant and hateful of intellectuals to make the idea of a life of hardship sound pleasing.

200 Word Sentence

The clouds, seeming to be as if they were in an alliance, lingered on in the time after the first snowfall well into the late of next week, hanging high in the sky, as if joined into one super gigantic mega cloud that never ends, which never appears to change hue, which never appears to move, and which never appears to disappear, and sometimes, however oh so rarely, if one is lucky, the muffled rays of sunlight will successfully manage to erode the top layers of the cloud, and merely permeate through the bottom, which in all reality is a mockery of the delusion that humans have control, the day never has a blue dot in sight, that would be too much for the average person to handle, it would be far too much joy to see a glimpse to the end of the cloud, it would bring too much chaos to the world, so the cloud stays stagnate for months, encasing the human population in a dome of forlorn, it greets you in the morning, in the afternoon, in the evening, and is even illuminated enough to greet you at night, and it is unfortunately here and inescapable during the majority of the year.

Tone Letter

Dear Manager,

                I would just like to take a moment to thank you for your thoughtfulness, which I was honored enough to receive from your restaurant only this past week. I must say the service was absolutely phenomenal; I only had to wait an hour before being asked if I was ready to look at the menu.

                It is important to give some context as to why I am so shocked to have such great service. I am a traveling businessman from the great state of New Mexico. Back in New Mexico we have this horrible habit of getting the menu immediately, ordering in five minutes, and then eating another ten minutes later. Now that I think about, I can’t believe that I was able to put up with such disgusting and barbaric behavior back in my home state. I think I will have to go sit in the corner to punish myself for all that I have allowed to happen.

The greatness of your restaurant only shined further after I received my meal. At first I was awfully confused why the waiter gave me a jar of chunky peanut butter, but then he told me how it would better suit my “crummy taste buds”. When I asked him about the fact that it was already half clawed at and eaten, with varying streaks and stains from many human hands, he gave me an answer that set aside any worry I might’ve had: It adds more flavor. His logic was so persuasive I nearly decided to devour the entire jar whole, despite my deathly allergy to peanuts, which as most restaurants require, I informed my server before placing my order.

                I then decided that your restaurant was far too classy for me, so I left. I clearly could not handle the level of sophistication that Louisiana has compared to my lackluster state of New Mexico. In fact I was so ashamed; I didn’t stop driving, not until I was out of the border of your tremendous state.

                Once I was in Texas, I settled in at a cattle ranch and had a savory steak that was nowhere near comparable to that divine jar of chunky peanut butter. While eating the melting onions which were drizzled over the freshly grilled steak, I started crying about missing out on your glorious restaurant’s food. I am not worthy of it, I told myself.

                I again would like to thank you. I hope that your restaurant keeps all of it’s standards the same, and doesn't change them in anyway.  Your restaurant was by far the best one I have been to, ever.

Best Regards,

                P. Wilton

Synecdoche, Metonymy, and Apostrophe Passages

Synecdoche

Goodnight Sweet Winter

             I slammed the frame into its place. The snowstorm was no longer streaming into my room. I started eating the box of popcorn. It was still freezing. I stared out the abysmal window at the craters shining down upon me. I grabbed the tin and spat my popcorn out. I grabbed the salt and dumped it onto all the popcorn. I devoured the popcorn, causing my face to turn inward.

            The annoying chirping beak started in my room again, giving me new anguish. I grasped my lead and continued working. My words were quite undistinguishable on the thin sheet of wood. I changed my glare towards the cement above me to see that a strange ravine was forming. The reshaped clay and gravel fell inward onto me. The pile of rocks stood there amongst the newly formed silence of the cold winter’s night, concealed within the confines of isolation at the lodge.

Metonymy

Thanks Jack Black

            If there is anything Hollywood taught me, it’s to stick it to The Man, which is in a way ironic. After watching the film in class I can understand that this is ironic because Hollywood is part of the problem with The Man. Hollywood is the fancy ties and large checks that suppress freedom and what truly matters. The Hollywood glow is displayed, but almost nothing of true value is.

            Even though that’s the truth, many sit there in their lavish homes being fed grapes still on the vine, while many others sit in a poor situation. The status of the yacht, it’s symbol, and what Hollywood calls lifetime achievement, does not fool me. The highflying flag can only do so much to protect the welfare of its people before Hollywood and the gold members of society fight back against it. All things considered, the movie we watched in class was a very eye-opening documentary about the hypocritical and barbaric society we live in today.

Apostrophe

Eris

            Oh emotion! How dare you make me feel the way I do! You can make me feel a trillion of separate feelings all interwoven into one giant state of being. You can’t make me so happy, and then bring me down into a slump, it’s simply not right. What right do you have? Are you a god? Are you some sort of omniscient being that can control everything and everyone with one flip of a switch?!? You control our actions with that ceaseless power of yours. How interesting it must be to be you, the person who both destroys and builds one’s self.

Unorthodox Point of View Short Story

Your Interesting Goop

You had the dream again. You were in an ocean. You watched the scene unfold as if from the position of a god, from a fixed point above the turbulence. The glistening azure waves swept over you, but you managed to stay afloat, afloat above the far rooted trench. The salt stung your eyes. There were vultures circling you, yes vultures, not the common seagull. They were pecking at you. They were biting. They were clawing. They were squawking. Every new scratch was the gift of struggle and pain. The thought of sinking to the bottom of the cavernous trench was nothing you feared, and in fact you were tired of the noise. You wanted solitude. You sank. You fell...all the way to the bottom of the trench. You were in a pit of darkness with faint streams of yellow light coming in. The water dissolved into the air, disappearing without you noticing. You walked along the bottom and opened your bedroom curtains.

You glance at your calendar and recall your relaxed schedule. You’re actually happy that today has finally come, and to get it over with. You hear a muffled buzzing sound coming from your desk. It’s your dad.

“…he knows that it’s that time of the month again! Martha, he likes fishing, otherwise he wouldn’t do it, now would he?”

“Hey! Dad? Hi, I can hear you talking.”

“Oh, Jimmy boy, I’ll be there to pick you up in an hour!”

“Yep. I’ll be ready.”

“Okay, okay, good, yep, I’m packing lots of salad for lunch and vegetables, mmmm, gotta love those veggies Johnny boy.” You could tell that your father was just saying this to please your mother. Your mother chimes in, with her squeaky voice:

“Who the heck brings salad on a fishing trip? That’s ridiculous, if you’re gonna lie to your wife, at least do it with a little respect, thank you very much. I’m not some stupid broad!” Your parents fading thick city accents make you remember your childhood. “Hiya Johnny, sweetie, do you actually care about these fishing trips? Don’t make your father force you to go if you don’t want to.”

“No, ma.” You giggle to yourself. “No, mom, I like these trips. It’s nice to escape from life and have some peace and quiet! I’m tired of you guys yappin’ my ears off!”

“Yeah, well, love you too Johnny boy,” You notice the joking tone in your mothers voice. “See ya when I see ya.”

“See yous when I see yous.”

After sitting on your front steps for a while, you manage to squeeze all your gear into the back of your dad’s compact car. You almost forgot that it was small and made you claustrophobic.

You recall how the lake in which you fish at determines the mood of the trip. The more fish and more clean the lake is, the more truth there is behind the idea of fishing. Sometimes your dad just wants to talk and brings you to the “pond” in town, which in all actuality is a giant drainage ditch filled with nothing but gravel and children’s lost dreams. Both of you know what it is, but once you arrive there, it’s basically an implied contract to act like it’s teeming with life.

“You, uh, want to go to Bear’s Lake?” Your father asked like it was an actual question, focused on the long road ahead of you both.

“Yeah, I love that place, c’mon pop, let’s go there.”

“Me too, you know, before we moved out to the country, we came here once in the summertime. You remember that Johnny boy?” You wrack your brain.

“No, no I don’t.” You don’t remember a lot of things.

“So much for those childhood memories, huh? They’re like nothin’ now; they’ve dissolved into air. Hey look, they got their house repainted. Ugly color. Some people just don’t use they’re heads…”

“Pops, I know you’re gonna ask eventually, let’s just get it over with now.

“Shall I go down the list?”

“Well, if I say no you still will, so go ahead.”

“How’s work?”

“Fantastic! They hired two more people to help take the workload off of me, I am leaving four hours earlier, everyone is so nice and generous, and they installed a new snow-cone machine.”

                  “Really?!?!?!” Your dad leans his weight forward on his seat to get a good look at you. All the while your dad doesn’t notice he is putting his foot down harder on the gas pedal.

                  “No! Of course not! It’s the same crummy situation as it was last month, and the month before that.” You become heated.

                  “Okay, well, uh, do you need help paying your rent, I know the rates an hour south can be quite difficult for most people.” You shake your head. “How’s your whole ‘music on the side’ thing going?”

                  “Really bad pa, really bad. I am hitting a block, and my mind feels like goop. I don’t get any time anyways to work on it, real musicians gets hours and hours a day. Even then most of them fail. I get one, maybe two a day if I’m lucky.”

                  You both unload from the car and carry the small rowboat from the top of the car to the edge of the lake. There are kids playing in the sand, arguing over the type of castle to build.

                  “You’re not trying hard enough, that whole ‘goop’ thing, yeah I only said that when I was young to get out of stuff.” You see the frustration on your dad’s face.

                  “I’m not like you dad, I actually care about my music.” You become more heated and hostile. You two meander your way off the shore and into the middle of the lake.

                  “What do you mean you’re not like me? You gonna do that Johnny boy?  Why do you always say that, am I so bad to be similar to?”

                  Your phone stings your leg and you answer it.

                  “Boys, boys! Your father forgot his medication he is going to have to come back, or your going to have to pick it up! I can’t, I have an appointment!”  Your mother’s unnecessary haste and panic causes you much anxiety. You hear the children in the background screaming as they kick each other’s sandcastles. There are grandiose shouts followed by horrible sobs. You focus in on every little noise and detail in the entirety of Bear’s Lake. Your father continues going off on a tangent.  You turn to say a snarly comment to your father, yet your foot gets caught on one of the raft’s seats. You enter head first, and the water cools you off. You remember your dream, and you laugh.